Feedback- Emily

Level: 4.
Mark: 34/35 out of 40.

-Mise en scene is very good. Styling is appropriate, setting is used creatively.
-Band look like a band. Singer is very charismatic, They all look 'Rock and Roll'
-Editing is appropriate, some points are a bit to fast at some points.
-Iconography, cigarettes and alchol used with care but very well done.
-Framing is good.
-Meaning is obvious.
-Looses its way towards the end- needs more close up of singer.
-Walkdown farmyard and back doesnt work. (We liked this shot)


We agree with most of the constructive critism but be like some of the shots that we dont. As i whole i think we are all very impressed with are feedback and grade and are going to work as hard as possible to achieve top marks.

Constructive Audience Feedback-Jack

I have been told that it would be useful to add friends to follow our blog and encourage them to leave constructive criticism. This will help the group become more aware of audience feedback and to ensure that our project is going to be pleasing it viewers. I hope to add a large group of friends to follow the blog as the more feedback the better in my eyes.