Excellent stuff you lot. Both Mr Ford and I are extremely proud of you.
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All the girls act well but Trinny is beyond brilliant. Whoever dressed and made her up deserves so much praise. Overall I think more Trinny is needed.
I spoke briefly with Vicky today and would recommend the following adjustments (I want you to get 40/40). Remember these are just suggestions, you've done brilliantly without much input from us so have the confidence to trust you own judgement and disregard anything I suggest as I trust your creativity and opinions.
The quick cuts between 31 and 37 are a tad too quick in my opinion.
More 'performance' shots. The ECU of Trinny at 38 secs is seriously brilliant, think if this could be echoed elsewhere.
The sequence between 51 and 1:04 feels too static/slow. Think about how energy could be added here.
1:18-22 needs looking at. It could be sharper.
The owww at 2:10-11 is underplayed at the minute
2:22-30 is superb, the interaction between Trinny and Hannah is believable. More of this would help other elements in the last 30 seconds. Try and get Daisy to mime playing the guitar (it need not be her hands remember) and add these elements. Even a close up of her face as she plays would do (she'd need a bit more attitude as she has a naturally friendly face). Like wise a bit more drumming (if possible) from Hannah.
The final shot is great, you get a clear sense of the personalities you've constructed.
Overall it's clear that all your hard work has paid off. Your representation of the band is really cleverly constructed and all the 'disagreements' in planning has resulted in a far better product than if you'd all been shrinking violets.
Excellent stuff you lot. Both Mr Ford and I are extremely proud of you.
ReplyDeleteOn youtube add tags to your video to get as many views as possible.
All the girls act well but Trinny is beyond brilliant. Whoever dressed and made her up deserves so much praise. Overall I think more Trinny is needed.
I spoke briefly with Vicky today and would recommend the following adjustments (I want you to get 40/40). Remember these are just suggestions, you've done brilliantly without much input from us so have the confidence to trust you own judgement and disregard anything I suggest as I trust your creativity and opinions.
The quick cuts between 31 and 37 are a tad too quick in my opinion.
More 'performance' shots. The ECU of Trinny at 38 secs is seriously brilliant, think if this could be echoed elsewhere.
The sequence between 51 and 1:04 feels too static/slow. Think about how energy could be added here.
1:18-22 needs looking at. It could be sharper.
The owww at 2:10-11 is underplayed at the minute
2:22-30 is superb, the interaction between Trinny and Hannah is believable. More of this would help other elements in the last 30 seconds. Try and get Daisy to mime playing the guitar (it need not be her hands remember) and add these elements. Even a close up of her face as she plays would do (she'd need a bit more attitude as she has a naturally friendly face). Like wise a bit more drumming (if possible) from Hannah.
The final shot is great, you get a clear sense of the personalities you've constructed.
Overall it's clear that all your hard work has paid off. Your representation of the band is really cleverly constructed and all the 'disagreements' in planning has resulted in a far better product than if you'd all been shrinking violets.
Oh and the video above is broken.