Feedback- Emily

Level: 4.
Mark: 34/35 out of 40.

-Mise en scene is very good. Styling is appropriate, setting is used creatively.
-Band look like a band. Singer is very charismatic, They all look 'Rock and Roll'
-Editing is appropriate, some points are a bit to fast at some points.
-Iconography, cigarettes and alchol used with care but very well done.
-Framing is good.
-Meaning is obvious.
-Looses its way towards the end- needs more close up of singer.
-Walkdown farmyard and back doesnt work. (We liked this shot)


We agree with most of the constructive critism but be like some of the shots that we dont. As i whole i think we are all very impressed with are feedback and grade and are going to work as hard as possible to achieve top marks.